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Thuraya Hamad (10/26/2008 4:27:00 PM)
this poet by far the most delicate and beautiful
you swallowed everything like distance, in you everything sank
i am taken! |
Aijaz Asif (9/6/2008 12:32:00 PM)
a beautiful write..lovely to read. i love it...10 is the least i can do with my bow to the great poet |
Naveed Akram (7/5/2008 11:14:00 AM)
I like the song of despair, the singing of the desperate voice hurling and provoking and repeating. Beautiful words can match in many intriguing manners. I believe this poet sang the song of despair to the letter, and that is a heroic deed of written accomplishment! |
Yoonoos Peerbocus (6/15/2008 5:02:00 AM)
early desire is brief for training ground |
Dr.subhendu Kar (6/12/2008 4:33:00 AM)
You girdled sorrow, you clung to desire,
sadness stunned you, in you everything sank! ..................wonderful imagery of life by the sorrow, desire and sadness when everything sank within.great write, i do admire |
Irene Zammit (1/5/2008 6:17:00 PM)
we've all been there, Pablo, your words ring true in the hearts of all who have loved with passion and hope and then lost. Still, at least we know we've lived. |
Marco Ribeiro (3/7/2007 9:22:00 PM)
Second Stanza, there is a typo, it should be corrected.
Abandoned like the WHARVES at dawn.
Not DWARVES
(This is not Snow White) |
Chris Graham (10/2/2006 1:02:00 PM)
Oksana - what pretentious crap are you talking? Or no, I'm sorry; whatever dost thou speaketh of, O pretentious one? |
Oksana Shuliak (9/22/2006 1:16:00 PM)
This poem touches soul with the strenght of wild wind and with the tenderness of the morning light...I've been crying... |
Daniel Gonzales (8/8/2006 4:54:00 PM)
seems like he loved her so much that he fell in lov ewith his despair, the way he missed her was a love lost.. |
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