|
|
 |
Jean Dament
(9/16/2009 8:19:00 PM) |
This is a beautiful piece expressing great loss well, by a very gifted poet.
|
|
|
|
Alex Webb
(1/7/2009 6:03:00 PM) |
This is a good'n. lol Marco, I'm glad you caught that.
|
|
|
|
januel aal
(12/24/2008 4:53:00 PM) |
this was an amazing read, im humbled in his shadow
|
|
|
|
Thuraya Hamad
(10/26/2008 4:27:00 PM) |
this poet by far the most delicate and beautiful
you swallowed everything like distance, in you everything sank
i am taken!
|
|
|
|
Aijaz Asif
(9/6/2008 12:32:00 PM) |
a beautiful write..lovely to read. i love it...10 is the least i can do with my bow to the great poet
|
|
|
|
Naveed Akram
(7/5/2008 11:14:00 AM) |
I like the song of despair, the singing of the desperate voice hurling and provoking and repeating. Beautiful words can match in many intriguing manners. I believe this poet sang the song of despair to the letter, and that is a heroic deed of written accomplishment!
|
|
|
|
|
|
Dr.subhendu Kar
(6/12/2008 4:33:00 AM) |
You girdled sorrow, you clung to desire,
sadness stunned you, in you everything sank! ..................wonderful imagery of life by the sorrow, desire and sadness when everything sank within.great write, i do admire
|
|
|
|
Irene Zammit
(1/5/2008 6:17:00 PM) |
we've all been there, Pablo, your words ring true in the hearts of all who have loved with passion and hope and then lost. Still, at least we know we've lived.
|
|
|
|
Marco Ribeiro
(3/7/2007 9:22:00 PM) |
Second Stanza, there is a typo, it should be corrected.
Abandoned like the WHARVES at dawn.
Not DWARVES
(This is not Snow White)
|
|
|
|
Home
