I decide to relieve myself suffering from the pain
And the wishes i won't gain
The pain which i have for people
The people do not care
To the truth which is bare
The civilized people who want to exploit
The others and speak sophisticatedly like Sigmund Freud
A step closer to death, i smell the breath of my angel
A step closer to death, the way straight to the hell
I decide to relieve myself from the lousy and dirty world
The world which i can't tolerate
I've lost all my despondancy to change the world
And all of my attempts are confined to the words
My smile won't be provoked
Nothing can soothe me, even the Coke
I nearly vomit
From the world of which i can't get rid
When i show the dark half of this world
All say, beat it.are you a psycho?
A step closer to the blinds, to the deaf
I laugh at you, i may kill my death
A step closer to death, the world won't be mine
Cause the breath of the death is my only sign
Love it! For some reason Rob Halford is singing these lyrics in my mind.
the title reminds me One step closer to the edge by Linkin Park movaffaq bashid
You have a lot of great idea, Most of your poems reflects your strong mind.. I appreciate most of your idea expressed in your poems.. Well done..dear!
Not a bad piece the last two lines really got me very well done
Death is the thing that all of us will face it a day. with out any doubts. The angel of death will come a day. Nice one
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It was a dark but there is some sense of humor especially about the coke ahahah but shouldnt let the dark be your background, cheer some lights if today we die will we try to do good things now so try to do good things every second as we can because each breath we take and release, a step closer we to die ....Again about the note, i think people nowadays always prefer The F*** things why need this, better we not make it as a culture Nader we are too overwhelmed by this bad junk things...but this poem has good sound just keep it up_Soul