A Story Of A Broken Conscious Poem by Shady ElShafie

A Story Of A Broken Conscious

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The shadow is the dark
represents the peace in the light
the dark will rise
from the derived light
reversed usage of thought
according to the light
its not a might
a well thought pattern to demolish that light
removing the might inducing the night
bluring the owns sight

What If Someone is born in the night
taught by the dark light
introdcuing the mystic might
to the powers of the moon light

What If Someone born in the light
taught by the blessings of elder's might
revealing every day rituals to the rays of the sun light

In the contrary, lights are in common
sources that are not in synergy,
thought the time is reversed in different poles
no wonder every day is to be more ignorant
it is hard to know what to go into a light
whenever you don't whats bad or right

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 13 May 2010

Brilliant work.......profound in tone!

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KYLEE BARTZ 11 May 2010

i like it. the words have a really great flow.

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Amrit Rathi 08 May 2010

Fabulous words to express your feelings. Wonderful!

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Shady ElShafie

Shady ElShafie

Russia, St-Petersburg
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