~~a Strange Commitment! ! Poem by POOJA LADYLUCK
~~a Strange Commitment! !
Amongst the distorted shadows in this moonlight
There is one, that waits for me
Every nite, m here on the terrace to see
If this strange commitment isnt decieved
His house isnt too far, but i never tried to see
I just wave at this shadow, and it waves back at me
I stand here, staring at the image, putting the world aside
Though unknown and out of reach, he hides somwhere inside
I wont strangle this bond with the ties of acquaintance
I wish forever it may be.....
tat v remain 2 familiar shadows
sharing a strange similarity................
A truly wonderful poem. Excellent thoughts and great composition. Loved reading it. Thank you very much.
Nice! Reminds me of old Japanese love poems, except yours also has a rhyme to it. Beautiful.
What simplicity and warmth this poem had. a feeling of familiarity yet the unknown. This was original and creative. I so enjoyed the read
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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read this once again today. u r awesome princess. what a write! thanks.