indira babbellapati

Rookie - 38 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

A (Sur) real Moment


The door closed
On its own
Outside, the drizzle
Gained momentum
But don't they say
One who comes with rain
Will stay for the night?

I heard destiny's feet
Trampling on the void...

Submitted: Thursday, February 28, 2013
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  • Rookie - 421 Points Shahzia Batool (2/28/2013 12:30:00 PM)

    Very tricky title Indira ji, yes, most of the times we feel unable to distinguish between a real and a surreal moment...the parenthesis offered the same confusion... (Report) Reply

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