A Thought (From, Poet On Www) Poem by Peter S. Quinn

A Thought (From, Poet On Www)

Rating: 3.5


I give you a thought
I once did know,
Inside on its own
It was there caught,
From a while ago
And was there alone.

The feelings that burn
In longings that hide,
And take each their turn
When others abide.

My love song and more
That inside all is,
And I am not so sure
If it's for real or a wish.

The day and the night
With thoughts that go,
A dream in its flight
And nobody does know.

The instants and hours
That comes on to shine,
Feelings that are ours
And hard are to define,
Or draw an exact line.

My love song and more
That inside me is,
And I am not too sure
If it's for real or a wish.

The day and the night
With thoughts that go,
A dream in its flight
For nobody to know.

Every part that plays
On the strings of a heart,
The many love's ways
That never will start,
Or break a new heart.

I give you a thought
I once did know,
From inside out brought
To a tune on the piano.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joy Vanderhelm 30 March 2007

Oh, exquisite work here. The rhyme is done well and once again the language portrayed is masterful. If I might make a teensy suggestion, however. Might the sixth stanza need a little work? the rhyme sort of falls apart a little there. Otherwise, a true poetic work of art. My Best, Joy

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