Dave Alan Walker

such a sad tale...but brilliant in your chosen form direct and honest....tyvn karen

very nice, I know a lot of people on drugs, the things they do: / the only thing you can really do is pray

I had a friend that did this, jumped from a tower block and broke her back, its sad. Good poem

Nice one there. Good work

*shake head* this poem is so good. my cousin (may he rest in peace) he hung himself in frount of his baby girl cause he got so high and couldnt get away from everything: ((but drugs are not worth it....

drugs are the death of the soul... take it from one who knows! great poem.

Strong message.
Sad that still in the 21 century we have been unable to do away with dealers.
Too much money involved. Those who are supposed to do away with dealers likely take their share and fail the community and allow the continued (indirect) killing of our youngsters. We can find Osama but allow pushers in the schools of our children. We need a kindness revolution.

nice poem, makes me wonder more about drugs...take care dave

Hi dave, thanks for your words on my poem, broken, I'm very new at this and so I don't feel confident enough to review poetry to any great extent, however, for what my view is worth, I liked Ur poem

A brilliant message to put over, well written.