Treasure Island

nadood al ND

(july 14 1997 / dont know)

a walk on the beach by nadood

From all the stress and all the pain
I would walk on the beach in the rain
I could hear the whispers of the Shore
Taking away all the problems and sore

As I look at the sea
I know there is nothing like this beauty

When I take a deep, deep breathe
It would take out the fear
And I could hear the whispers of the ocean in my ear
Telling me softly and gently 'Oh, dear! Oh dear'

As my heart beat goes faster and faster
I could hear the ocean's laughter

I love it when the gentle touch of the water hits my feet
You would never want to take a seat

When the wind blows
And your hair flows
Your stress just simply goes

You feel as calm as ever
You feel peace and so much better
It's just you and the beach forever

And when you lie on the sand
And you touch it with your hand
You feel like you're in wonderland

Every speck of sand brings back time
Memories and days of faith, hope, and shine
Instead of thinking about crimes

The beach makes you not worried
About the things you did or going to do
Because the whispers of the ocean will still say 'I love you, I really do'

Oh! That soft, gentle touch of the ocean
Makes me wonder about the potion
They used to put me under their spell
And that beautiful sound of the bell

Oh! How much I love the beach
I come to it when I'm sad or mad
I come to it when I'm happy or cranky
I come to it for advice
All this for no price

As I weep beside it about my problems everyday
It is like I can almost feel it touch my shoulder and say 'it's going to be okay'

I don't know whether to trust or believe
But the ocean said 'just follow your heart and you will achieve'

Do you want to know why I love this ocean?
It is because I know it will never leave.
Because finally it told me to achieve

Submitted: Monday, February 21, 2011
Edited: Monday, February 21, 2011

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  • Unwritten Soul (2/14/2012 5:47:00 AM)

    You done it in very special way..captivating, make feeling vapor to readers soul...fresh like ocean splash to take away the pain..just what you said! Beautiful poem keep writing more nadood_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Kee Thampi (11/16/2011 11:09:00 AM)

    From all the stress and all the pain
    I would walk on the beach in the rain
    I could hear the whispers of the Shore
    Taking away all the problems and sore
    greatness of soul (Report) Reply

  • Abdallah Gamal (11/12/2011 5:35:00 AM)

    Unbelievable! Outstanding! this poem is a Masterpiece! I couldn't imagine that you wrote it, really fabulous poem! (Report) Reply

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