Ordered by everyone
Trying to run
No were to hide
No were that wide
A path unclear
A soul full of fear
Not knowing who is whispering in your ear
Hoping someone, somewhere is here
Closing your eyes thinking your that wise
When you finally start to rise
Thinking there is no reason for us to hide
When your looking at the unclear path
You know there is something to find
Stuck somewhere unknown
Looking at the phone
A ringing sound, a tone
No one, no one at all?
I feel like I fell the deepest fall
Looking at the unclear hall
Wishing someone to call
No, nothing at all
Trapped in a box
Surrounded with rocks
No breathe left
A phone next to your left
Waiting for a call
It is funny when you can't do so at all
When will that call come
From who will it be from
Waiting desperately
Waiting uncomfortably
Thinking no one will call
No one will know that at all
Eyes starting to close
Wishing to see another rose
Going in a deep, deep sleep
Nothing else to keep
Just waiting, and waiting, waiting
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Ring, ring, ring, ring
HELLO!
Aha finally there's a call for you...hope it's not a missed call or wrong number haahaha joking :) _It's a nice poem Nadood, the story of a waiting and we waiting the ending n the ending with a call that nice! _Unwritten Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
sounds and feels like a claustrophobic nightmare... very nicely expressed....conveys the effect very well indeed liked it cheers