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  ... A waste of time......(Dark)

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  My rose has walked away
I feel the same, after a new day
I'm fuel by uncontrollable rage
It's frustrating living this life
Angry with myself for falling in
Your juice of unfaithfulness
Turned a sweet loving heart
Blacker than dirty tar!
You spat twisted lies in my life
It was you, that murdered
My ability to love and trust murderer!


Months and years the pain can't subside
Bitter memories are the scars
Impossible to wash away
They haunt by day and comfort at night
Why must hearts fall in love?
If it's not forever
It's a waste of time!


August 2nd 2009
Thank you for reading


Eyan Desir

Submitted Date Sunday, August 02, 2009
Submitted Date Sunday, March 14, 2010



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Marieta Maglas (7/2/2010 7:50:00 AM)
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A nice poem which reveals again the beauty of your HEART
rago rago (10/6/2009 11:53:00 PM)
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waste of time.....life in itself is waste of time........but a rich content and rich in sense.........nicely written..........
JS Black (9/16/2009 10:34:00 AM)
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While love can be a many splintered thing, I'm not sure it can ever be a waste of time. Keep the faith! Excellent job and keep of the good work...Jeff.
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (8/14/2009 10:04:00 PM)
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why must a heart love
if it not for ever.....a painful question
a painful situation for any one....10
Maia Padua (8/13/2009 6:26:00 PM)
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very good and positive thoughts of moving on...
very directing write towards forgetting and accepting things
though it hurts..
strong title..Waste of time..very true..
crying and wanting over lost love is just crying over spilled milk..'why cry? '
strong message for those who are heart broken
i love this, my friend..
10+++

lovelots,

Maia
Kranthi Pothineni (8/9/2009 9:59:00 AM)
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Friend, there is nothing waste in life. Some unpleasant events happen only to transform us to something new and hopefully better. Expressive write.
Little Hatila ;) (8/9/2009 9:31:00 AM)
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'Why must a heart fall in love?
If it's not forever
It's a waste of time! '

so sad but unfortunately it happens between now and then...i do agree with you, i don't believe in love if it is not forever love....10

Hataw
Shekhar Joshi (8/5/2009 10:18:00 AM)
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nicely written.........sad......maybe u are right about the waste of time thing..........

excellent work
Yoonoos Peerbocus (8/5/2009 8:24:00 AM)
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rich poetic stuff [time] and richly penned
Uriah Hamilton (8/3/2009 6:28:00 PM)
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Very dark but it often feels this way.
 

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