A Word Or Two Poem by JoJo Bean, Dodgy Dave and Meggie Gultiano

A Word Or Two

Rating: 5.0


When I'm old and wrinkly
in the future someday
will someone write me a poem
Saying how wonderful I look today

I might stare back with
a toothless grin
But I still deserve a word or two
To help a new day begin

Your tender words
And loving thoughts
Is enough to keep me going
Ahh …those words to help me through
To begin my day again..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arnold Dilley 17 October 2008

a nice combination of three talented poets.Good job

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Alison Cassidy 11 October 2008

From time to time, I think we all reflect on what our older years might be like. I remember my dear old mum saying (at the tender age of 84) 'I feel just the same inside you know dear.' Yes, a kind words never goes astray, no matter how old the recipient. A gentle reflective piece from three of a kind. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 07 October 2008

A kind word or two can make all the difference. Very nice. A ten for all three of you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Thad Wilk 07 October 2008

When you get old an' gray one day I'll write you a poem an' in it will say You look just as wonderful As you did 'back then'! For age doesn't matter to me An' i will always be - to thee Your friend - till th' end ! ! *10*! ! Thad

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