A Work In Progress... Poem by A.E.K.G Navrilith

A Work In Progress...



today i went dancing in the rain,
with puddles in my eyes,
rivers running down my cheeks,
rivers from the skys.

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Chitra - 25 July 2009

metaphors..well used to depict the emotions

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Afzal Shauq 25 July 2009

today i went dancing in the rain, with puddles in my eyes, rivers running down my cheeks, rivers from the skys. its really a good romantic poem and metaohor..one can visualize it..the situation and the words you put very perfectly..well done dear poet for that much sweet poem...10/10

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