We own one mistaken World
Who let her people down like a maid
Who put her people under and let dead
And lost for ever and fade
We own one precious Planet
With sophosticated technology and Internet
With all the development we face and met
Most of the time it is usefull, I bet
We own fabulous Continents
Who let us live with our parents
And gave us special friends
As well as wonderful lives
We own one criminal Earth
Who separate unfairly and creates death
Also contains people with biggiest felony
For most kind people, Earth does not have harmony
Our complicated World! ! !
Even in his simplicity there is complexity people make the world more complicated. Bravo! in few lines you could describe Clearly our Complicated World.
A sensitive and sensible observation of world and happenings around. I liked the idea of being affectionate towards nature and our planet earth. Best wishes
The world has become complicated really........nicely penned.....
Yes, it´s true. That´s the purpose of literature, it helps us deal with all this mess around, the arts can help man understand themselves and the world.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Oh I feel this poem Luwi, I just hope that so many more get to read this wonderful poem....Our world still continues to spin in grief doesn't it sweetheart...excellent topic to write upon...and you have with pure heart...well expressed