</></></>Today I went to a city side,
What a fake world with
such a fake smile..! !
I couldn't talk to people
I love, and Laughed with people I didnt like..
Today I went to a city side..
what a misery!
I bought a t-shirt worth nothing,
With 90% discount,
and exclaimed with haughty pride..! !
I talked to people far off,
but could not recognize the one who lives beside..
This was the taste of city side..
I crossed the pingy poo of roads
and went to eat and get some life..
I emptied my wallet, its every penny,
but I am still hungry,
This, oh God! I cannot hide...!
I billed and smiled,
a fake smile..to the people there inside..
and said good bye to the city side..!
This was the taste of city side! !
A painful, depressing reality of today's materialistic world where people are living pretentious lives which holds no deep meaning, everybody aloof and distant from others. Must say, good depiction of the various states...
Ah. you hit a nail on the head with this piece.
I loved the immediacy and the feeling of being right there at your side as you went through the city streets- - that is talent, my friend
That is called diplomacy. Smiling while you are hurting is indeed going with the flow. What a fake! A nice poem. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Splendid loved the imagery depicted delictely on city and people....that's what we too do all the time..the futility of modern, urban living...nice poem.
Whatever you explained here is true and vivid.... hat off to you.....
Whatever you explained here is true and vivid.... hat off to you.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Forsake all the fake smiles for the sake of humanity! ! ! ! ! nice one! ! !