Abhishek Tiwari

Rookie - 19 Points (Kanpur/UP/ INDIA)

Tuzhme Apna Nishaan Dhundta Hun! - Poem by Abhishek Tiwari

Chahne walon ke Haz me
main tuzhe apne saath dhoondta hun....

Teri ankhon ki surahi me
main apna jaam dhoondta hun...

Almast si, bedaag si ek mast maula
Saansein talaashe jindgi

Mumkin nahi ye jaan k bhi
qurbat me teri
Main kaisa araam dhoondta hun..
Subah shaam dhoondta hun....


Jhunjla gaya kuch is kadar
k
Ab dur se bhi dur bhagey jindgi

Fir bhi dekho
Aaj bhi tujhme main khudko subah-shaam dhundta hun..

'Chahne walon k haz me tuzhe main apne saath dhunta hun...


Comments about Tuzhme Apna Nishaan Dhundta Hun! by Abhishek Tiwari

  • Rookie - 0 Points Varna Soyakaze (6/17/2014 10:30:00 PM)

    Ap unnme Apne Nishan dhund rhe ho, n hum is duniya me humare Nishan ko dhund rhe ha...
    Koi Nhi..! Acxhi kavita ha.
    Ise pad acha laga, ye man ko bha gaya.
    Shukriya.... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Varna Soyakaze (6/17/2014 10:28:00 PM)

    Ap use apne Nishan dhunte ho, aur hm hamare Nishan Ko dhund rhe ha.
    Koi Nhi...Awesoooome Poem pal...
    Jst Keep Writing.
    Y Kavita padkr acha laga...
    Shukriya. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Tanya Gupta (2/27/2014 4:16:00 AM)

    very nice stated 'chahen walon ki haz me tuzse main apne saath dhunta hun..'.a real authentic poem..enjoyed a lot..nice work..i also need your comments about my poems please come and read my poetries also...thanks.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 732 Points Shahzia Batool (4/11/2013 12:23:00 PM)

    written without any artificial effort, but with much feeling...that is the best thing about it...! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Anita Sehgal (11/11/2012 10:26:00 AM)

    thanks for sharing.. nice read.. enjoyed! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 8, 2012



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