I was happy to see my day,
However, things has been going on outside,
I try to do my best to survive in there
But, my best was my worst.
Before that day I wanted to be somebody
A professional cloth designer,
A professional singer,
Or a hip hop dancer.
Now I can’t even do it anymore,
Because, life has turned out badly
For me, my dad, my family,
And my beloved mom.
The person that I trust,
Loved, and who was my idol,
Took my life by killing me.
She left me died in her stomach.
very evil but true, sometimes it has to be done like stagatory rape, but not unless it haaas to be done its terrible i love this its imaginitive but, it needs more detail, or to be looked over your potential seems to be moe greater than this keep it up :)
I can tell the passion you put into your poetry. I believe in this poem and stand with you against abortion. this is a very creative and a good perception. good work and keep it up you can go far in life with poetry like this :)
Gloria, Once again I see some grammar and spelling errors, but a very nice poem. Go to my site and Read 'I want to Live'. The entire Congress of the United Sates owns a copy of my poem to help fight abortion. Keep up the good work. Lynn
A mature write.... it has sum gramatical mistakes but i still like it I agree with sara when she says sometimes its 'sadly' the best option....but disagree when she says its just an 'EGG'....she is completely wrong in saying that Anyways gud work....\m/
I completly disagree with this poem. Im sorry but which is more cruel? Letting a new born baby into a world where his/her parents are not wealthy and not in a secure relationship with a ba environment and maybe parents that are only teenagers? OR to let a Featus die NOT a baby, when you have an abortion you ar enot killing a baby its just an egg! so you have to know why alot of people in this real world take the option of abortion! Sometimes it is the best option.
I couldn't agree with you more. I wish everyone could read this and think the same way. Amazing poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I agree with what your saying!