About To Break Free Poem by jeaneth sithole

About To Break Free

Rating: 4.8


awaken to tell the dream
a daughter of suffer is about to break free
maybe i was born to tell a story of tears
paint a picture of sadness
or even write a book to be published in african history

battering tears for happiness
i realize what belonged to me is finally home
'' smile ''
I shall now paint a world of smiles
surrounded by nature beneath my feet
while my past held my hand and taught me to walk free.
I am born
disciplined by my pain once a cut in my core
But now the sins of man forgiven
From the dawn of the rising sun kiss me smiling
Walk with me
see me claim my stay and
create a name
A daughter of man
is about to break free
because she is awaken to tell the dream.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 07 September 2009

battering tears for happiness i realize what belonged to me is finally home '' smile '' I shall now paint a world of smiles surrounded by nature beneath my feet while my past held my hand and taught me to walk free. I am born wow a sweet poetic short story type poem with dream feelings but with open eyes..and there are some things high lighted like smies..and thst really heat feeling and I believe too that the samiel is the only tool to over come all the problems of life..means this is a good and lovely poem with rich idea..10/10

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Henry Brown 13 July 2009

Welcome to poem hunter. You have a vote of ten from me. I agree with Kefentse write more and see you dream and poularity grow

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Kefentse Sathekge 03 April 2009

inspiring. i dare you to write more. :)

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