Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 5,701 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Achievement Haiku - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

A long walk through trees

the conical mountain reigns

the summit beckons


Comments about Achievement Haiku by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • Rookie - 243 Points Palas Kumar Ray (4/1/2014 1:22:00 PM)

    & the Traveler must reach there soon to the summit.Nice & clear imagery. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Irene Clark-hogg (7/31/2009 8:08:00 PM)

    Ben recommended your Haiku.
    I am pleased he did.
    Irene (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (7/6/2009 10:41:00 AM)

    excellent indeed! ......10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 23 Points Jim Norausky (4/3/2009 8:03:00 PM)

    Excellent visuals.10 here. Jim (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 243 Points Palas Kumar Ray (2/23/2009 1:32:00 PM)

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    Very vivid imagery of a lovely walk through tall trees.It must be a 12.00 by your watch now.
    I enjoy reading such intelligent works.
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  • Rookie Ershad Mazumder (2/20/2009 8:58:00 AM)

    Good haikus, bring them all under one headlines.I like your hikus.Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (11/22/2008 6:08:00 AM)

    yeah........they do...well penned (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 21, 2008



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