Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 5,945 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Elegy To Time - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Like rainbows dissolving or love's end
We mourn the parting of friends

As the Sun travels East to West
Do we wonder where or when it will rest

In the Spring a world reborn
A child's first step this Summer's morn

Autumn's passing into Winter's night
Shows a glimmer of Heaven's light

And slowly ticks the clock and chimes
As in passing beats our time.

Comments about Elegy To Time by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • Rookie Irene Clark-hogg (4/10/2014 4:18:00 PM)

    I enjoyed reading your poem. A delightful string of couplets.
    I tried to send you a message but PH won't let me. This is the second time I have tried to comment on your poem.
    Kindest Regards,
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  • Rookie - 26 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (3/23/2009 7:12:00 PM)

    An excellent poem on the passing away of time. It is true, time and tide waits for no man. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr Kamran Haider (10/29/2008 12:45:00 AM)

    Beautiful rhyming, preserving the beauty of thought and great to read... Thanks for sharing... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ron Flowers (10/27/2008 4:52:00 PM)

    A delightful poem.

    Ron (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,778 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (10/13/2008 7:11:00 PM)

    Another winner...I said before, you have the voice of a poet, I can hear you! Keep up the good work.

    Dorothy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Martin Swords (10/6/2008 6:23:00 PM)

    lovely poem, beautiful treatment of passing time.
    Similar sentiment to my 'Autumnal'.
    Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Costa Anakiev (10/2/2008 5:31:00 AM)

    deep work, i can't compare it with my 'our sun' that is too unserious. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr.Wardha Jawdat (9/22/2008 12:17:00 PM)

    a very enchanting piece...read it at 11.30pm my time and it felt like the perfect way to end a silent cool evening.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (9/15/2008 12:26:00 PM)

    an interesting write of the various dimensions of time..
    which is the world's uinversal rhyme. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ron Flowers (9/12/2008 8:22:00 AM)

    A really pleasant read.

    Ron (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (9/10/2008 11:40:00 AM)

    O it is a nice verse, so 10 for it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie samar Halabi (9/6/2008 10:51:00 AM)

    Great and good job it is really deserve 10 Wonderful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Absent Wryta (9/5/2008 11:49:00 AM)

    Time is precious. I really like the use of it in this poem. Nicely written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Mamta Agarwal (9/5/2008 7:48:00 AM)

    lovely poem, how time flies. lovely imagery.i really enjoyed the poem.10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Tom Balch (9/4/2008 6:29:00 PM)

    Time, the poets inspiration, great piece 10+ regards Tom (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,976 Points James B. Earley (9/4/2008 10:40:00 AM)

    An interesting view of the varied aspects of time! Great title. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 4, 2008

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