Addiction Poem by Linda Moore
Addiction
Knowing the risk of addiction
On all who Love you is cast an insidious affliction
At the height of selfishness they are drug along
To the bowels of Hell, where all is wrong
Destroying others lives, not just your own
Addiction doesn't care, it cries and moans
Some are lost, never to be found
They could not escape Hell's horrible hound
This is a very good poem. It is concise, focused, uncomplicated, wuth good rhythm and rhyme qualities. If deserves a ten. So, that's what I gave it. GW62
lines make one to think whats goin on this day to day life....much true....last two lines simply awesome.....sebastine....10+
'Addiction doesn't care, it cries and moans Some are lost, never to be found They could not escape Hell's horrible hound' An amazing composition. 10 from me.
Yes, though understand the risk of addiction may get more moan but will be unavoidable, you provided enough rhymes so well so I offer 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Destroying others lives, not just your own Addiction doesn't care, it cries and moans. ....great lines...... Fahim