Adios Beautiful World, Adios Poem by nader baheri

Adios Beautiful World, Adios

Rating: 5.0


Adios beautiful world
With all your dirts and hurts
The times my heart would burst
With all ups and downs
With all pros and cons
At last i am free
I can reach my hands to the sun
Then i will have fun
Or will i have the fun?
Adios beautiful world Adios
With all the sadnesses and happinesses
I bless you for the romantic times
I forgive you for the bitter wines
Adios to those who pushed me on my knees
Adios to those who helped me back on my feet
Adios beautiful world Adios
I had the fun when you took my youth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 22 October 2012

Adios beautiful world, sayonara amazing earth, Let we say Hi gorgeous new life, Bonjour new path We fall in the deepest vial of challenge We reach the bottom of the earth But we will stay alive as we can and our world is not earth but the place we have, wherever we go Need no sun, without moon but with soul we will survive Adios to the beautiful world, for hello to new beginning...Hello_SOul

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A Dark Lifetime . 02 December 2012

Beautiful my dear friend! I got a feeling of sickness to life, someone who dreams of something better, someone who is tired of being stepped on. That was what I felt while reading this. I truly love this poem!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 November 2012

Aha such a commendable poem! Esp likd d part, 'pushed to your knees, got u back on feet'. Yeah life is full of hapy n sad moments both. Kudos poet.

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Allemagne Roßmann 23 October 2012

This is so far the best among the newests yours.Specially appreciate the concepts underlying.

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Hamid Negah 23 October 2012

Our world would be much better...unfortunately, the people who are not convinced of their right.

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Asif Andalib 22 October 2012

We all have to leave the earth someday or other. So we should embrace death as a friend who will give us a better life. A heartfelt write. I like it

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