Adrift 2 Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Adrift 2

Rating: 5.0


ADRIFT, with my chaotic struggles,
i collapse into a bipoler ghetto, and
find broken strings, and dirty books,
and a friend with black smoke....
ADRIFT, into the night, i fall like
a failing priest, and wait for the
free gift ...................
the free gift of love........
adrift no more.........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 04 October 2006

Frank asked the question I was thinking, a splendid read.

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Ruby Root 25 September 2006

Hi David, I think you have to kind of look for Love, It doesn't really drift in and work on it. Take care care David Unique and Excellent poem.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 25 September 2006

AND AFTER YOU FOUND LOVE, WERE YOU STILL ADRIFT? LOL! NICE WORK dAVID, MY GOOD FRIEND'''''''''''fjr

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