Ace Of Black Hearts

Rookie - 50 Points (04/17/1984 / Homa Lousiana)

(Advice Poem) A Letter To His Replacement


Harsh is a loss of love, and to replace its stead is not as easy as slicing bread.
Especially when one is so selective.
An elective not of your choice, but of his heart.
A caressing start.
But time over that which one obsesses.
Faults are created and can be easily agitated.
Gentle one says as if your capturing a butterfly within your hands.
Once damaged he will never be the same.
His vulnerabilities are not to blame.
His weakness is his pain.
And her hands have become stained.
He will loathe with an oath as a promise he takes to his grave.
A distraction is what he needs, that is what he craves.

Submitted: Tuesday, February 14, 2012
Edited: Thursday, April 11, 2013

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  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (4/24/2014 2:05:00 PM)

    Niiiccceeee! ! ! ! remind me of my early
    teens, almost every writing i wrote
    then was about blue skies and Friday
    and nature! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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