After You Left Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

After You Left

Rating: 5.0


When some one departs from life very early
We remain quiet and peaceful internally
Think about old memory and his good side
And cry when unable to control it and hide

Such is the situation when husband is no more
The life becomes hell therefore
No one is there to take care and look after
Many worries about children as how to cater

If something is left behind as fortune
Then it is good and better than any none
But if left behind high and dry
Big question arises as to how to tackle and try?

You are and were together
He was your success and feather
You were trustful and till remained
With absolute integrity and maintained

No one remains here a day longer
When you have to leave despite being stronger
That is divine cycle and must be respected
More of pain and grief is sometimes not well reacted

Face the situation as it approaches in
It may stay for some period but won't remain
For the time longer than required
So it got to be accepted and admired

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2012

awesome mike viggiano15 minutes ago Great topic, well written Comment 0 Loss and death

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2012

Tiffany Gutshall34 minutes ago I like it.

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Re: After you left (Score: 1) by Zbird on Tuesday, July 24,2012 (15: 31: 54) what a beautiful poem about death. I too believe when it is our turn we shouldn't fight it but realize it is our final act in life so accept it. everyone dies and then a new life begins. beautiful poem!

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When some one departs from early We remain quiet and peaceful internally Think about old memory and his good side And cry when unable to control it and hide

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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