hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 54,246 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Against Will - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I was in full blossom
When you entered with treasure of kingdom
You fascinated me with style
I was mesmerized meanwhile

Were to be happy on earth
There was to be no dearth
You promised to get me moon
It was likely to fade away soon

You bargained with time
Cheated me and conscious in long time
It inflicted injury in my heart
I took it as deceptive art

I was cautious with you
As my soul spoke true
"Never believe blue eyed man"
I was after all noble woman

You soon showed color
It was about to jeopardize my honor
I got wind and forced you to withdraw
You saw it as danger with relation and thaw

I prayed almighty for having saved
Else he might have dared
Violated modesty at against will
That would have surely resulted into kill


Comments about Against Will by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/15/2014 10:42:00 AM)

    questions

    iama metaphor 14 minutes ago
    This makes me want to know more of the subject. Who or what this was about. It is intriguing. I like it.
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  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/15/2014 10:42:00 AM)

    Vivid

    Kevin Helms11 minutes ago
    I enjoyed your poem & it's unusual perspective. Well done. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/15/2014 5:37:00 AM)

    Maithili Roy awesome
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  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/15/2014 5:37:00 AM)

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome Rohani Daud, Ade Caparas Manilah and 2 others like this.
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  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/15/2014 3:29:00 AM)

    I was in full blossom
    When you entered with treasure of kingdom (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 15, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, August 15, 2014


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