Invisibly travelling hoping for someone,
to release him from bondage, trapped like a abalone.
Emotionally handicapped for someone to hear his cry,
but yet everyone is deaf no matter how hard he try.
Pretending like he is gifted with wisdom,
Still helpless and trapped in his mighty kingdom.
Frisky and ill-fated the qualities of his whole,
thoughts gushing in his mind as he grows ole.
That when in this world there will be a candle with a light,
which can be seen by anyone without sight.
Sacrificing himself when all he can do is taunt,
left with nothing but only him to flaunt.
Sober at people who thinks he is a gloat,
like as if they were free birds in the sky who float.
Crying at people who tells him he is too servile,
but doesn't know whether it can be futile.
Thinking to himself who are they to decide,
on land or sea his wish to reside.
Beliving that God to him is not fair,
Waiting for that day when he senses there is no air.
yes Areeba it is sacrificing, sorry about it typing error and thanks wini, i still have to read your poem tree
yes Areeba it is sacrificing, sorry about it typing error and thanks wini, i still have to read your poem tree
i need to correct my spellings so i wud like to ask whats the spelling of sacrifising is it sacrificing or the one that u had written i wonder pls correct me!
this is gareeba-ur classmate, madam very nice write keep up the good work! such difficult english language gr8, its so nice!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
great write i liked it i too have submitted a gareeb poem! ! ! ! ! just check it out. its the tree