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Aging Love

Love is like the blossom
Bursting into full bloom
Staying pure and perfect
Then time knocks at the door
Aging and withering
Until the light of the blossom fades
So perfect from conception
Withered at the death
Love knocked and has been
Stayed a while
Disappointedly departed

Submitted: Wednesday, February 25, 2009


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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (4/29/2009 8:20:00 AM)

    The blossom is the perfect image for this beautiful poem. Time's knock on the door comes for us all and we like flowers fall from grace. Stunning! Karin Anderson

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  • Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/14/2009 8:00:00 AM)

    a literary masterpiece.. amazing job

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  • Marie Shine (3/4/2009 1:39:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem with a very good and effective comparison between new love and a flower in bloom, taking us to the different stages with lovely imagery.
    A 10 from me.

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  • Alicia Page (2/25/2009 5:05:00 PM)

    it's very beautiful and it's also very lovely

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