Ah! Lagos Poem by Olufunke Ayeni

Ah! Lagos

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I must tell you

I am from the village, you know that one?

The one behind the hills

So you must understand my loss when I found myself on Lagos Island.

I thought the constant rustling of feet meant there was a war coming

I was to learn everyone here walks like they are being chased


Then there were the ever jingling bells

'kree' 'kree' 50 naira,50 naira buy your shoes 50 naira

as for the shoes they must have been stolen...who sells shoes 50 naira?


The clothe sellers were even more amazing, they knew everyone's name

One look at you and you will hear 'aunty sewa your size dey' amazing


There were also some people whose sole source of livelihood was to either 'slize' your bag or drag your purse with you... my bag wasn't stolen, it was taken.

The 'taker' looked me in the eye and simply asked for it...in a scary tone.


After loosing the bag I decided to go back to the hills on my way out I found a more interesting site.

A school, law chamber, a restaurant, several apartments, shops and possibly a warehouse were all in the same building. To this I gave a bow.

EKO ILE.

Friday, September 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: african lifestyle,comedy,nigeria
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Douglas Scotney 25 September 2015

Love to visit you if I didn't have to go through Lagos

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Kelly Kurt 26 September 2015

I enjoyed reading of your experience, Olufunke. Thank you so much for sharing. Peace

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Fabrizio Frosini 26 September 2015

a nice write.. an imagery filled with 'colours' and 'voices'... even if it describes the bad experience you had at the market.. Thanks for sharing Olufunke, and.. Keep posting WELCOME at P.H.! :) Cheers

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Ovi Odiete 26 September 2015

A Beautiful and enthralling Poem about Lasgidi.

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Ovi Odiete 26 September 2015

Wow.... Fellow Nigerian. I Love this poem....... Incredibly Beautiful. Especially the pidgin English.... You twisted in.

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Roseann Shawiak 26 September 2015

Interesting and enjoyable poem, quite an adventure going by way of Lagos! Seems to be very difficult traveling through these parts! Loved this poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Olufunke Ayeni 26 September 2015

thank you for enjoying

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