Indira Renganathan


Alankar(Decor) -90


The Complete Couplet is a poetic unit of 2 lines
that expresses a complete thought within itself.
Meter and rhyme are at the poet's discretion.

Attired, Adorned, Offered-
(Some complete couplets on the nine planets)

Sanguine Sun spotted red with ruby
Ingrained wheat for food salty sweetly

Milky Moon moving around white and pearly
Rich and ricey for minds and hearts happy

Coral Mars in enraged orange balled colorfully
Feasting leguminous with red legume family

Ever green Mercury enrolled with emerald verdantly
Fed with green bean pulsatively

Giant Jupiter yellowing in sapphire edifyingly
Grand connoisseur of chicpeas tastily

White Venus spangling diamonded masterfully
Vacillated for snowy lablab more ravingly

Slow and steady Saturn blues in sapphire auspiciously
Grubbing over sesame mirthfully

Ascending up the node yellowed in garnet lunatically
Blackened Rahu pulsed for black gram suplicatingly

Descending down the node with cat's eye lustrously
Darkened Ketu squirms gulping horse gram blessingly

Submitted: Monday, May 19, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, January 14, 2015

Topic of this poem: religious

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  • Rookie - 137 Points Seema Chowdhury (11/3/2008 9:51:00 PM)

    VERY NICE AND COLORFUL DESCRIPTION OF THE STARS AND THE SOLAR SYSTEM.

    READ MY NEW POEMS

    1. MOVE TOWARDS AKNOWN GOAL
    2. CREATE A STORY OF YOUR OWN
    3. OUTSIDE WORLD (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shimon Weinroth (10/30/2008 2:04:00 AM)

    very colorful pictures and metaphors of the planetary system, profoundly viewed
    and philosphical,10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sivan P.G Menon (8/1/2008 2:23:00 AM)

    indiraji..

    rhyming thoughts...astronomical'....wavelength....
    careful..handling of...poetic expressions...

    regards..and great inspiration.. (Report) Reply

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