All Alone Poem by misha vasandani

All Alone

Rating: 4.5


ALL ALONE........... Another lonely day, with one more miserable day, A fresh thoughty in my mind, which is ruined by the might.Not a single person to speak, I am becoming so weak.Even in the crowd, i fell so left out.I keep on looking for you, to help me come out of my blues.Not a single friend, not a single hand to lend.No one to read my eyes, even though they look clear as ice.I walk all alone, seeking for the one who has forever gone.Even after waiting for so long, i did not get what i prolonged.Not a single hug to raise up my spirits, when i start considering my demerits.Even after being so honest, people always turn to be dishonest.But for how long will this continue? Will there be no sunshine after the dew? -Misha Vasandani.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wandering Scarlet 17 September 2008

some more rythmn can really make this piece a large step up from its current form which i interperet as very raw, but with potential. keep trying :)

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