All Nighter Poem by Daniel Y.

All Nighter



A student renders thoughts as words
to represent his fractured paradigm
and struggles to fit all the data
into his massive memory.
Indices and algorithms rack inside his skull.
He starts behind and races
to meet the bar, he misses.
Always short of expectation,
his brow hangs in sorrow.

Fluorescent lights pick up where coffee left behind
the student studies all throughout the night.
Wide raccoon eyes are glued to his square of light
his snails
his fingers
type away.
Before the waking hour
he hits the bed
staring at the ceiling
much nicer than the clock.
The alarm rings.

Hit snooozze.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 27 May 2014

So I read this poem in Feb and my comments stayed with the academic setting with my memory of all-nighters becoming routine to finish assignments and preparations on time. But this season both of us may be exploring surrealism and that adds another dimension to the poem - the significance of the setting in time - namely, N-I-G-H-T, that mysterious realm which is both an actual time/place and a universal metaphor of the psyche. So now I see the student surrendering to the night. Here's Robert Desnos's summons: Is the night kind? /Does the night tear you? /Do you harvest the night? /Is the night echoless for you? How much more interesting than a geology or history assignment this all nighter will be in the surrealist vein! does the night tear you? /

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Daniel Brick 11 February 2014

This poem rings true, Daniel. I remember those all nighters when I was cramming for a test or finishing a paper. Sometimes I'd fall asleep at my desk, and dream I had finished EVERYTHING and was so happy, then I'd wake up and see an incomplete paper or an unread textbook! Of course, there's a positive aspect to such experiences: when you're on the edge, no time to spare, you force your imagination to go into hyperdrive, and your poem captures some of that nervous, creative energy. It's a good homage to our resilience as students.

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