All That Around Me Poem by Achintya trivedi

All That Around Me

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I watch the sun fall aback
and rising white patch
amidst dark lands..
I hear the thunder
breaking down to earth
and smell the wet dew
melt in dry sands..

I feel the spring's melody
springing the so far dead and
blooming them one after the other..
I see some infants
resting in beds, always but
dancing with the whiff
of their old mother..

I walk along the shores
besides the verge of two worlds and
hear clashes amongst waves of other side..
where one being immortal
immobile and weaponless
while other one enjoying
possession of a mere tide..

and too feel the soothing calm gust
as I stand and sop my feet
watching my traces, clothed away by tides..
either be it land
or be the waters
one above the other always
rests forever on either sides..

Tuesday, July 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 30 July 2015

Really fantastic imagery, could feel and see everything you described so eloquently in this poem. Could feel the verge of two worlds, enjoying their differences altogether. Great poem Achintya! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Achintya trivedi

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Lakhimpur kheri, UP, India
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