Almighty's Land Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Almighty's Land

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“I want to visit your world”
“Can I go back to same fold”?
One of soul requested almighty
“Beware! Not to feel pity” God warned

You will do only what is expected
People are cunning but present as respected
You will be cheated and pushed aside
Think carefully and decide

The soul still insisted on going
Almighty tried to convince more
“They even send their parents to old age home”
No respect for elders and nothing is welcome

“People are selfish and involved in cut throat competition”
They will not care for bond and age old relation
They will ditch you any time for no reason
So drop your idea about visiting as living person

“I want to see my self” he was adamant
Almighty decided to send him for simple want
“Alright brace up right now for downward drive”
I wish you all the best to survive

He was heard crying at the time of birth
The arrival was declared with kid’s breath
He was happy to be on Almighty’s land
Now he was to search the mysterious end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 January 2014

GOOD Alexander K Opicho58 minutes ago Good and nice Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 January 2014

good Gordon Hodges59 minutes ago Good range of words

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Gajanan Mishra 29 January 2014

searching the mysterious land, very good sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 January 2014

“I want to visit your world” “Can I go back to same fold”?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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