When I was alone
In the misty light
I walked for long
In the moonlit night
The misty light could be bright
If you were with me.
Every moments could be sunrise
In our happiness and glee.
The crescent moon
could be full
and sparkled on the sea,
Our long roads could be
Flowery and green
Only for you and me.
But as you never
Came to me
The moon became
Only crescent.
I was walking
And walking alone
Un till the roads end.
Everything was same
As before,
But nothing was
so pleasant.
I was walking alone
In the moonlit night
To reach the road's end.
Loaded with a loneliness that leaps and longs for love. Well done my friend!
A nice poem. 'Every moments could be sunrise In our happiness and glee.' - A nice expression. 'But nothing was so pleasant. I was walking alone In the moonlit night To reach the road's end.' - Sad and sombre thoughts. Leaves empathy in the readers' minds.
I was walking alone In the moonlit night To reach the road's end. Very well written.
Wonderful! Dear poetess! A beautiful poem. Lonely night sometimes, is not alone. May be a poetic boon. you may like to read my poem The Wind: An Extremd Instance
wonderful alone scenery described here- The moon became Only crescent. I was walking And walking alone Un till the roads end. /// beautiful poem
But as you never Came to me The moon became Only crescent. I was walking And walking alone Un till the roads end..........if you were with me...... it would have beennnnnn unimaginable....... such a love poem. very very nice my dear poetess. desire, wishes, unfilled........ again wish tht it will come true..... that is life. we go through life like that and die........ God bless you for this thoughtful poem. tony
So lonely....wonder why Thais is what I am going through in this part of my life. MYbe soon I will be just alone and not lonely. Sensitive touched my heart
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very impressive poem.