Treasure Island

maria sudibyo

(280883 / parist van java)

Alone


Alone
in the dark of sorrow
Why me?
Why it has to be me?
I took the candle
that lead no shine on me
I'm scared
there's nobody
Rain's knocking
on my escape window

Submitted: Monday, April 30, 2007
Edited: Monday, October 03, 2011
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  • Theorem Thetruthserum (1/14/2009 10:17:00 PM)

    I love this poem...I can relate and have related with the topic of loneliness...rain's knocking at my exit window...awesome line. (Report) Reply

  • marvin brato (4/30/2007 4:46:00 AM)

    Good write Maria, you have stir the fear in me when alone in the dark. Life is like that, there are moments when you are in the darkest... alone with no one to comfort you as you walk in life struggles. Write more. Liked it,9 for it. (Report) Reply

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