maria sudibyo

Veteran Poet - 1,069 Points (280883 / parist van java)

A Cup Of Coffee - Poem by maria sudibyo

It's empty
You plea

I fill half
You sigh

I pour full
You drink all

If it's empty
You...


Comments about A Cup Of Coffee by maria sudibyo

  • Rookie - 197 Points Spiritual Seeker (12/23/2011 3:23:00 AM)

    Excellent poem....deep spiritual message within few words. Great 10 (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
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  • Rookie Jose Lu (12/3/2011 11:32:00 PM)

    Very clever, short..
    It's a REALLY smart poem.Great! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,126 Points Tiku . (6/28/2011 2:09:00 AM)

    very nice.short and simple.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jim Mowat (2/2/2011 3:42:00 AM)

    one very nice simply poem. were did you get the idea for this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nikunj Sharma (12/29/2009 10:03:00 PM)

    its open to many interpretations...life is like a cup of coffee, when filled half, we look at the other half tha's empty and when it is full, we empty it ourselves without realising that refills dont come free and cheap...I like the way you create poems out of small, simple and insignificant things in life....good work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (9/11/2008 10:07:00 PM)

    I cannot imagine a purpose for this. A poem without a purpose is
    like a doctor without a patient.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 142 Points Joseph Poewhit (5/29/2008 2:43:00 AM)

    A big - YOU - when it comes to coffee (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 29, 2008



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