Alone Poem by Anne Ornelas
Alone
Standing outside with the wind
blowing my hair.
people are laughing,
people are talking,
people are gossiping,
while i stand their alone.
Its hard to tell who will
stick by you no matter what
its hard to tell when you find someone you
really love when all that person does is cheat
on you and you are left alone ounce again.
5/2/08
anne this is a really great poem ice job i hope you are doing better now love you kiddo
believe me none of us are alone- whether u believe me or not when u believe in yourself you will realise that- great write- write more
Ya, you never know when your going to be alone. One day their there for you and the next their gon. life has no manul no drecshouns. No one to help asist us, we heve to rely on our selfes to know what to do and how to trust. Life is unpland and un nown, plans chang life changes and people leave and brack our harts thay sckar and heal but our haret will never be the same. Thers this hole that neads to be filed but, by doing it means tacking the chants of geting your haert bracken agen, the chants of macking the hole biger, hareder to fill. But one day it will be filled with love and the scars will heal over and you will be a stronger person a difrent person one that knows how you want to and are being treted and you will now if its the right chous you have made. This is good it macks me think thanks for sharing.
yeah of course you never see it coming all of a sudden you are all alone
You need to re read your poem, it has a spelling mistake once not ounce and you need to add one next to the word some. Just a friendly help out plase dont take offence to my coment cheers,
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4/26/2024 4:56:07 PM # 1.0.0.1119
OMG ANNE! I LOVE THIS POEM.. IT'S JUST THE WAY I'VE BEEN FEELING AND THINKING LATELY.. I FEEL LIKE A PEBBLE IN THE SEA.... IT'S GREAT! !