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Anne Ornelas

(08/23/1992 / Alpine T.X)

mix..........whatever...........


Wanting to be someone i'm not.
Lieing to myself and to others around.
Whats happened?
Why is this happening?
The only answer to it
is because i'm letting it all happen
let it get to far.


Not wanting pity
Tired of seeing it in peoples faces and eyes.



God i'm sick of this
might as well let the current
take me like a float



11/10/08


just popped into my head so just figured to submit it

Submitted: Monday, November 10, 2008
Edited: Tuesday, February 24, 2009

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  • Shekhar Joshi (7/30/2009 10:39:00 AM)

    The only answer to it
    is because i'm letting it all happen
    let it get to far............u have admitted what most never want to....

    nice write.... ;) (Report) Reply

  • Aijaz Asif (11/16/2008 2:35:00 PM)

    it sure do happens sometime to us too, a very beautiful and moving write with deep thoughts...a very rare writting style which i like myself...thanks 10+++++ nd A++++...added to my favs. (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (11/15/2008 6:34:00 PM)

    The expectation is higher when your demand gettin bigger.......this is the fact of life we have to live with.nice piece Anne.Keep writtin! (Report) Reply

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