i feel like I'll die alone
just like that on my own
why we're only friends
cant we stop our friend-zone
is it my fault that your not here
or is it the payback of my loan
just like that everything will be thrown? ?
like it was never known
where are the days when we had fun
the days of scary movies and the popcorn
its like everything turned to a stone
and i broke it with a dinosaur bone
i can hear my end tone
because i am and i will always be ALONE
Anni, I liked this piece, but my dear, you are wrong... you are not alone. Please, read my words, and you will understand this... ;) -Kelly.
loved your poem.......deep thoughts that evoke my heart are put into this poem.lovely
Loved this one. Don't let your isolation overpower you. Let your pen be your friend
You're not alone dear. Sometimes the situations force us to feel so. But its not so. Keep up your head high and walk like there's nobody like you and never under estimate yourself. This was a nice piece. Take care.
The feeling of loneliess It can be so strong And yet if we just try to count to count our remaining blessings we may never feel alone again
I like the couplet when you just let the rhyme scheme go, with fun and popcorn... rhyming is good, but it can be a bit of a chain round a poet's neck. Well - you've made something good out of a sad experience...
really fantastic.... i love the lines its like everything turned to a stone and i broke it with a dinosaur bone good work! ! »so close«
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
certainly a good write i like it