Anni chin


Alone


i feel like I'll die alone
just like that on my own

why we're only friends
cant we stop our friend-zone

is it my fault that your not here
or is it the payback of my loan

just like that everything will be thrown? ?
like it was never known

where are the days when we had fun
the days of scary movies and the popcorn

its like everything turned to a stone
and i broke it with a dinosaur bone

i can hear my end tone
because i am and i will always be ALONE

Submitted: Saturday, October 06, 2012
Edited: Saturday, October 06, 2012

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  • Rookie Shivani Misra (10/30/2012 10:09:00 AM)

    You're not alone dear. Sometimes the situations force us to feel so. But its not so. Keep up your head high and walk like there's nobody like you and never under estimate yourself.
    This was a nice piece.
    Take care. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,551 Points Hans Vr (10/30/2012 6:42:00 AM)

    The feeling of loneliess
    It can be so strong
    And yet if we just try to count
    to count our remaining blessings
    we may never feel alone again (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points John Raubenheimer (10/25/2012 7:07:00 AM)

    I like the couplet when you just let the rhyme scheme go, with fun and popcorn... rhyming is good, but it can be a bit of a chain round a poet's neck. Well - you've made something good out of a sad experience... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie So Close (10/23/2012 9:40:00 AM)

    really fantastic.... i love the lines its like everything turned to a stone
    and i broke it with a dinosaur bone
    good work! !

    »so close« (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 75 Points Yash Shinde (10/22/2012 9:14:00 AM)

    loved your poem.......deep thoughts that evoke my heart are put into this poem.lovely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (10/21/2012 9:15:00 PM)

    Anni, I liked this piece, but my dear, you are wrong... you are not alone. Please, read my words, and you will understand this... ;)
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

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