(30th November 1991 / Wolverhampton)

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Alone Together

Up in the sky
I wonder why
The clouds are fluffy and white.

Down on the ground
All safe and sound
The sun shines 'specially bright.

Out on the sea
I wish I could be
With you, wrong or right.

When I'm at home
My dreams often roam
And we're quietly alone together.

When I'm with you
All night through
I hope we'll be friends forever.

Why can't I see you?
Why can't I see you?
Why can't I see you? .

I hate being far
I hate being apart
But I hope I'll see you soon.

As soon as the sun shines over the moon
Then I'll see you,
I'll see you soon.


(15.04.2007)

Submitted: Sunday, April 15, 2007
Edited: Monday, February 14, 2011

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  • Kortnie Smith (4/26/2010 11:43:00 AM)

    I love this It flows so beautifully

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  • Emily Oldham (9/20/2008 4:51:00 AM)

    starts happy and innocent, ends sad and romatic. it's fab! :)

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  • Jona`e Levett (10/27/2007 8:37:00 AM)

    ohh i love this! ! ! its so pretty.

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  • Jon Lloyd (4/24/2007 10:07:00 AM)

    Beautiful work, Becky - romantic and plaintive. Love it!

    Jon xx

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