Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 12,389 Points (17.03.1965)

Amazingly - Poem by Lyn Paul

Just in one beautiful day...
Early this morning an amazing lightning show
Heavy hailstones, but of course no snow
The rain was heavy, it filled the pool
Giant puddles taking the children to school

The enormous clouds, showed different shades of grey
You would think it was the month of May
By mid afternoon you could see the sunshine
At the end of the day the weather was fine

Peculiar how the weather can be
Yet this is our life.
Amazingly




Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL


Comments about Amazingly by Lyn Paul

  • Gold Star - 4,766 Points Francis Lynch (5/19/2014 8:15:00 AM)

    The rain was heavy... school. Love these lines. Good write. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Owain Glyn (4/14/2013 2:16:00 PM)

    The rain certainly can't bring you down! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,919 Points * Sunprincess * (12/14/2012 5:15:00 PM)

    i love stormy days, as long as i am at home and not driving..
    beautiful write. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shalyn Stachmus (9/1/2012 4:25:00 PM)

    Awesome. You've painted a perfect picture for me. Thank you.
    :)
    I just love it when it rains. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 4, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 4, 2014


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