(16 August 1920 – 9 March 1994 / Andernach)

An Almost Made Up Poem

I see you drinking at a fountain with tiny
blue hands, no, your hands are not tiny
they are small, and the fountain is in France
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  • Briana Ochoa (3/20/2008 11:49:00 AM)

    i find the stuff written on bathroom stalls entertaning. especially when others comment back. i never do, just laugh. i suppose this would resemble something like it, though not as lengthy. i liked it.

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  • The Former Badjist (3/5/2008 6:44:00 PM)

    well, yes, but how come this is a poem? it
    is something scribbled on the back of an
    unposted postcard and there are millions
    of those suppose i said i don't feel your pain?
    this sort of thing could maybe be written on
    the back of public lavatoty doors where tra-
    ditionaL poetry readers don't go in search of new
    apercus and surprise some poor guy who thinks
    like that but has never picked up a poetry book
    in his

    LIFE

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  • Robert Jackson (2/26/2008 7:59:00 PM)

    I feel your pain, man

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  • Lucy Goosey (12/24/2007 2:15:00 AM)

    dear flo,
    i agree.

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  • Brittany Valania (11/18/2007 4:08:00 PM)

    oliver, i completely agree.

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  • Oliver Brookshore (10/27/2007 6:07:00 AM)

    Nothing short of one of the greatest pieces of poetry written.

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  • Annabelle James (5/6/2006 9:42:00 AM)

    Dear Flo,
    Who do you think you are?

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  • Flo Smith (5/14/2005 5:21:00 AM)

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    This is a nice poem, but it is too long.


    Flo

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