An Excruiciating Pain Of A Exquisite Heart Poem by Navod Jayasuriya
An Excruiciating Pain Of A Exquisite Heart
I left many of the days,
Deep in scar onerously.
Before having the judge received,
I made myself scarce,
And deemed to get apart,
To see the end of the play.
It was the ultimate chance I ever had,
For the close of the day it last,
And the heart rending story ever daubed,
was the inconceivable consequence I didn't expect.
Our love was invariably an invariant romance,
Our first glace was a cursive line,
Your eyes were bluish, sparkling and dazzling diamonds,
Our story was a lovely romantic scherzo.
Golly! the guardian angel,
So much stunning,
Your glide in serein supreme,
Sweet angel, so much at ease.
You were the girl adored of most,
you were the lass best of all,
Sure of what I felt most,
Was you were adorned with a lovely spell.
Fervent, fervid, fervour of fettle love,
All that was over with a mighty move,
Our love played to a rhythm, of a lovely groove,
You the most beautiful girl forever be!
You were the lassie adored of most,
you were the belle praised of most,
And she dwelt as lovely as a daffodil flower,
Alas! dishy angel,
Forsook me, like a boisterous gale, she rushed.
Denouement of the game we played,
Seems to be on hands of us,
And we compiled to be as lovely creatures,
By the bond we made for the journey we hoped.
There can be no one like her,
There cane be none as lovely as her,
There is no any simulacrum resembling her,
You are a remarkable sign of beauty,
That lasts forever!
IN TOGETHER,
THE SAD IN APART,
THE HOPE IN TOMORROW,
THE JOY IN THE HEART!
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5/5/2024 9:49:28 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I love the Poet's Note......... ;) ==================== “An Excruiciating Pain Of A Exquisite Heart” check the spelling of “excruciating”. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - “Fervent, fervid, fervour of fettle love, ” I like the alliteration ….f, f, f, f …………though I haven’t checked definitions for usage; I don’t know the word “fettle”. there are a lot of words I don’t “know”. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - “And we compiled to be as lovely creatures, ” check the definition/usage of “compiled” here. maybe it works. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - another new word to me: “Sim•u•la•crum (sĭmˌyə-lāˈkrəm, -lăkˈrəm) ► • n. An image or representation. • n. An unreal or vague semblance.” - - - - - - - - - - - - - - at the beginning and ending of the poem, it sounds like the ‘guy and girl’ (?) are getting along well. but near the end of the poem is this: “Alas! dishy angel, Forsook*** me, like a boisterous gale, she rushed.” …………which sounds like the girl is not interested in the guy. hmmm? ***“for•sake (fôr-sākˈ, fər-) ► • v. To give up (something formerly held dear): renounce: forsook liquor. • v. To leave altogether; abandon: forsook Hollywood and returned to the legitimate stage. More at Wordnik from The American Heritage® Dictionary of the English Language,4th Edition “ - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - overall good work for someone who probably speaks/writes another language usually and is so young.. bri :) p.s. I know you asked me to read a different poem, but I came to this one first. I’ll try to get to the other later. I’m kind of busy and have limited time online. rate: 7? i see i am in your friends list. can you tell me which of my poems, if any, you have read?