Nick Jordan.

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An Ode To Squabbling Couples - Poem by Nick Jordan.

It seems to me as of late,
That things have gone awry,
Things aren't looking all that great
And I really don't know why?

I've tried to pin point what it is,
But cannot find what's wrong,
I'm not quite sure if it's you or me,
But it's gone on far too long.

No matter which one of us is at fault,
Is really not the issue,  
But I know if you walked out that door right now,
That I would really miss you.


Comments about An Ode To Squabbling Couples by Nick Jordan.

  • Bronze Star - 2,804 Points Paul Brookes (5/30/2013 3:46:00 AM)

    Really well written I suppose we all that I can't live with you or with out you. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 46,737 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/16/2013 6:13:00 AM)

    really miss you. I like it. good write.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 25, 2013


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