An Undeniable Letter To A Farrier Who Lives In A Remote Village Poem by nimal dunuhinga

An Undeniable Letter To A Farrier Who Lives In A Remote Village

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Dear Smith,
My stallion is ready for the grand race and I promised him to buy new shoes.
That should be durable and not fashionable.
I want you to explain my situation dear,
I have a holey wallet in that never remains the colored notes.
My Windmill is very familiar with the racecourse and I am sure he would bring the prize home, this is a humble requirement and invitation from a forgotten old friend.
sincerely,
The lame jockey Surmise.

*Postscript
I hope you still collect the old coins and I have few silver that I can polish for you.My broken door is open at all for my drunkard old friends.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 18 April 2009

Insinuations flood this fine poem that shares the wily words of your impoverished and lame jockey. You give the reader a minimum of information to create a maximum of impact. Great work Nimal. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 02 August 2008

One can read much between the lines of this enigmatic letter. A fascinating story, Nimal. Ten for this. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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