An Unique Answer Poem by Naveed Akram

An Unique Answer



Sayings and assets connive together,
Basing our tasks on the absorber.
Upstairs an unique answer is awaiting,
My accumulation of debt is actuating.

Faster than the doctor, your car lands,
Administrating a new job with brands.
Down in the scrubland, their grass
Partakes a ritual made of the brass.

Together we remake a roll of paper,
The system of thinking called a philosopher.
Pictures of thought astound his head,
But poems and sayings were ready to be bled.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 24 June 2010

A unique answer might sound better. Also your use of 'their grass' I believe should be 'there grass'. I tried to send you a private message...but it seems you do not receive messages. Regards, Dilwyn

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Naveed Akram

Naveed Akram

London, England
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