Anger Poem by Soul Writer

Anger

Rating: 5.0


People ask me why im filled with anger

People keep pushing me

& that in itself brings me mortal danger


If people just left me alone

Just let me be, maybe then they would see

What really beats inside of me


Take a good look & you will see

It's the heart of an Angel

That beats inside of me


Never look at the exterior

Just focus on the interior

& if you cant do this

Then you will alwayz be inferior


I say 2 you

Open your eyez & widen you mind

Or forever your soul will be blind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily =) 27 May 2007

This is so good, I really like the message it gives.

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Anita Blake 28 May 2007

no wiser words

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David Harris 19 June 2007

Ramon, very wise words my friend. A lot should read and take note. Top Marks from me and thanks for sharing them my friend. David

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Linda Weischedel 02 January 2008

EXCELLENT POEM! ! ! I'm giving you a 10 on this one.

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Tanya Stanford 31 August 2008

Brilliant piece reminding us that it's inside what counts, not the outside. This is an excellent use of words to create that angry feeling. Well done.

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angelianne 1012 19 June 2008

Open your eyes & widen you mind Or forever your soul will be blind well written piece..i will surely add this to my fave poem lists...thanks for sharing..10/10

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~ Jon London ~ 11 May 2008

fantastic piece...loved the ending...well constructed poem....great stuff. best wishes Jon

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Ameera Aidrus 09 April 2008

Excellent! ! i really liked it.........keep writing

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Melvina Germain 18 January 2008

I love your quote, 'open your eyes and widen your mind or forever your soul will be blind. Excellent poem Soul Writer. Melvina

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