Anger I Thrive On Poem by Danielle Franklin

Anger I Thrive On

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I have built it up
I have let it flow
Now its time to let it show
Pushed between him and her
I reveal who means more to me
She gets mad and hates me for it
But I let anger build and just ignore it
I go to him I've heard enough
I want the truth but I cannot trust
Her over him or him over her
I let it build up I let it flow
Finally Ill let it show!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Who Iam 10 February 2008

Anger can destroy the best of things, some people use it as a weapon, your insight is very well taken and well written.

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You make an interesting point about anger. I love the opening how you built it up and then let it flow, it makes kind of a dam analogy that works well.

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Keith Young 27 December 2007

great poem it hit where it should on the hearts of others thanks for another great poem ur a great writer keep writing ok

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Danielle Franklin

Danielle Franklin

Mineral Wells, Texas
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