Bonnie Collins

Rookie - 14 Points (February 27 1947 / Middletown New York)

Anniversary Of Our Love - Poem by Bonnie Collins

Forty years of bliss and non bliss how do
you ever try to marinate all the non harmony
moments, to tenderize its foundation

By standing by each other and always knowing
irreguradless of how hard the situation may be for
the other, the tomorrows of our souls will mend
the broken rainbow and make our days shine
once more

Waiting each night for your return, to say how
was your day, is only a small part of my love
and how we managed to withold all the raging
seas and weather them to an island of tranquility

Thank you for the most wonderfull forty years of
my life, without you, my soul would not be in existance

Happy Anniversary and know, I would do it all, all over
again........

To Tom, on our anniversary of our love.......


Comments about Anniversary Of Our Love by Bonnie Collins

  • Rookie Lynn Glover (7/30/2010 4:05:00 PM)

    Bonnie, this is a great tribute to the love of your husband and the many years you to have shared. Congratulations on your anniversary. Lynn (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/20/2009 1:41:00 AM)

    this is truly a beautiful poem.. i am mesmerized.. u are AMAZING! ! ! bravo (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 154 Points Michael Gale (11/11/2008 3:03:00 PM)

    What a great loving tribute to the one you love on an anniversary.
    I like to put on a tough facade or exterrior, but beneath it all, that is how i feel 'bout my wife of six years. I guess i'm a mushy romantic at heart. Don't tell anyone, though! I hadda giv'vit a tenner though.
    God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Fay Slimm (9/27/2008 1:14:00 AM)

    What a wonderful Anniversary message Bonnie. thank you for sharing with us your tender devotion. A fine example of enduring love. Greetings and best wishes from Fay. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Robert Sheridan (9/19/2008 10:41:00 AM)

    Bonnie,

    The consistency & range of this lovely piece, & how you solidified it all makes for a timeless poetic read ... beautiful!


    Best to you always,

    Robert (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 66 Points Craig Anderson (7/31/2008 6:24:00 PM)

    Tom is a very lucky man!

    Indeed a woman's love is the most powerful force, and Bonnie didn't you convey it well. Forty years...Damn. Makes my twenty five seem like an engagement. Loved this piece as always.
    Best regards, Craig. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Andrew Blakemore (7/31/2008 7:49:00 AM)

    Very sweet and deeply touching work Bonnie, you truly write from the heart. Love, Andrew x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Serenity Prayer (7/30/2008 1:28:00 PM)

    very sweet and touching. great job! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 951 Points C. P. Sharma (7/28/2008 10:53:00 PM)

    …touching sonnet on the 40th anniversary of your love… wielding the power of your pen and the overflowing feelings of your heart..

    The sweet sour memories of togetherness are written,
    On the paper roll of heart with a golden pen;
    The bitter sweet momentary ego’s fight,
    Never overtook insatiable love’s delight;
    The clamoring memories of the love of yore,
    Assure me your love will shines once more. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Con Nie (7/26/2008 11:42:00 PM)

    How wonderful to be so much in love. Beautiful poem. Sincerely, Connie Webb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 354 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (7/26/2008 10:50:00 PM)

    he tomorrows of our souls will mend
    the broken rainbow and make our days shine
    once more.................................................................
    love seems brimming by the glaze of the blue
    the hamony tunes by the bliss by the life....................wonderful expression of love that razzles on the ripples of smooching breath, ingeniously luscious green, grin when expands to reach the moon by the imagery, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,400 Points James B. Earley (7/22/2008 7:43:00 AM)

    A delightful message of love and affection.....and the efforts necessary to make a relationship work. Congratulations.....and....Happy Anniversary.....to you both! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bob Gibson (7/22/2008 12:24:00 AM)

    This left me speechless! for i must do as you have done
    to teach myself and my sons how the love of life is won
    i am just one of but a pair, i heed your tender word
    in prose i pass on to my children those tender word I've heard
    regards Bob (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 21, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 23, 2008


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