Another Sad Little Poem Poem by Kat Edwards

Another Sad Little Poem

Rating: 5.0


Abandoned by all those she knew,
As though they couldnt see through,
Her painted on guise,
they just sat there and aqiesced her lies,
Sitting there in her tacit pain,
she wanted to forget that painful name.
Hopeing no one will see the signs,
All those tiny red lines,
Wishing they would go away,
Healing themselves during the day,
Refreashing themselves in the cover of night,
When she is alone and to tired to fight,
The only one she cared for was no where near,
So she slipped into the common fear,
She knew not to go to deep,
For if she did they all would weep.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

THIS ONE IS DEFINITELY MY FAVORITE! ! ! ! It is AWESOME! ! ! ! ....Just like me! ! ! NINJAS! ! ! ! <33Payyton

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 20 January 2009

this is one of the best poems i have EVER read! ! ! ur an amazing writer and u should keep at it.... i kno a 14 year olds opinion means very little in this world but this piece got to me

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Tom Balch 27 October 2008

Great piece, well crafted 10/10

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Chocolate Bunny 24 October 2008

tears and pain. good write

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Drake Kinkaid 24 October 2008

Very sensual... You are good

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